Sand and Green Islands

I wanted to write today
but the Sound is so calm
and so cold.

2 Responses to Sand and Green Islands

  1. Bonnie L says:

    Nice… your ending reminds me of

    This Is Just To Say
    by William Carlos Williams

    I have eaten
    the plums
    that were in
    the icebox

    and which
    you were probably
    for breakfast

    Forgive me
    they were delicious
    so sweet
    and so cold

    • Kaston says:

      I’m excited that you made that connection. I didn’t write it with the intention of echoing Mr. William^2, but a few hours after writing it, that poem popped into my head. The things that kick around in the back of our heads…

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